I went looking for Padden Creek
went looking for its mystery
went listening for it to speak
found it has a secret history.
I learned some maps are wrong:
in places I couldn’t hear its song.
For a stretch the creek’s underground,
buried, but always homeward bound.
Andrew Shattuck McBride
NaPoWriMo 2014 ~ Day 17
This is my second attempt at a rispetto; my first attempt is buried and languishing in my notes.
According to Robert Lee Brewer, the rispetto is an old Italian poetic form in eight lines with a rhyme scheme a/b/a/b/c/c/d/d.
Thanks to my friend and mentor Judy T. for the September 2013 issue of Writer’s Digest which contains a print version of Brewer’s blog post on the rispetto.
Read Brewer’s “Poetic Asides” blog here.
Whatever form your poetry takes, press on with YOUR writing!
Andy, bravo for you. With all due respecto, I do adore your respetto. Thanks, too, for the note on form. Can’t wait to try one!
Thank you Susan.
I’m looking forward to reading your poem.