A variation on “Ashes” has been accepted by Contemporary Haibun Online, and should appear sometime in October 2012.
Andrew Shattuck McBride
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“Ashes” is my August 18th poem for the postcard poetry project. I used a contemporary card view titled “Orca” of an Orca (“Killer Whale”) transiting through Puget Sound. I sent the card to Carlton of Winter Park, Florida.
Blessings to Carlton and all, Andy
P.S. We can tell that this is a wild Orca: the Orca’s dorsal fin stands straight up. An Orca in captivity has a dorsal fin bent over.
This and “Water Feature” are so moving, Andrew. Both grief and the “necessity” for “memory” are conveyed with great economy here.
Thank you Jennifer.